Green Monkey

Hmmm.... Your story seems pretty good. I like its layout. But 'Rae' seems like a girls name to me. I really like this piece and hope that that's not the ...

Oooh... i like your story... But the only thing I have noticed is the the thing Randy pointed out... I am currently working on a extremly, super duper, really loooooooooooooooooooong ...

Like Emma said, you do need caps... But other then that, your poem showed intricate structure and it seems like you've put effort into it. I really liked the second ...

Well, let's see here... Your writing is very good and displays unique skill. I wish I could write more detailed as you seem to. But then again, everyone writes more ...

(looks like 2 people sent in a reply at practically the same time!!!!) slot

Ummm.... I guess they're good... I can see slight drawing talent in them. Perhaps I should send in artwork. :)

Song :-({|= :whistle:

TYWC

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You're story is good, though too crunched up in that small space. Some spaces between paragraphs, perhaps? ;)

pots

Cool... Well written. But you spelt Pity wrong! Also, it seemed kind of short. It needs more in order to be a pley (at least thats what i think!). :):):):)

English Class

Like Firestarter, the fact 'by' is on the next line makes it sound off. But other then that, its really good and belongs in the dramatic poetry forum. :)

Umm... Though I am slightly confused, your story has unique qualities...