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Re: The Quest
Hmmm.... Your story seems pretty good. I like its layout. But 'Rae' seems like a girls name to me. I really like this piece and hope that that's not the ...
Feb 1, 2005 -
Re: The Nameless
Oooh... i like your story... But the only thing I have noticed is the the thing Randy pointed out... I am currently working on a extremly, super duper, really loooooooooooooooooooong ...
Feb 1, 2005 -
Re: sweet fallacy
Like Emma said, you do need caps... But other then that, your poem showed intricate structure and it seems like you've put effort into it. I really liked the second ...
Feb 1, 2005 -
Re: A life unwritten
Well, let's see here... Your writing is very good and displays unique skill. I wish I could write more detailed as you seem to. But then again, everyone writes more ...
Feb 1, 2005 -
Re: Change One Letter
(looks like 2 people sent in a reply at practically the same time!!!!) slot
Jan 26, 2005 -
Re: Emma's Work (PLEASE LOOK)
Ummm.... I guess they're good... I can see slight drawing talent in them. Perhaps I should send in artwork. :)
Jan 26, 2005 -
Re: This word reminds me of...
Song :-({|= :whistle:
Jan 26, 2005 -
Re: This word reminds me of...
TYWC
Jan 26, 2005 -
Re: Change One Letter
plop
Jan 26, 2005 -
Re: The Horse
You're story is good, though too crunched up in that small space. Some spaces between paragraphs, perhaps? ;)
Jan 26, 2005 -
Re: Change One Letter
pots
Jan 26, 2005 -
Re: Short Play: Suffering
Cool... Well written. But you spelt Pity wrong! Also, it seemed kind of short. It needs more in order to be a pley (at least thats what i think!). :):):):)
Jan 26, 2005 -
Re: This word reminds me of...
English Class
Jan 26, 2005 -
Re: The Circle
Like Firestarter, the fact 'by' is on the next line makes it sound off. But other then that, its really good and belongs in the dramatic poetry forum. :)
Jan 26, 2005 -
Re: Prose: "Chronicles of the Dhampir: Emergence"
Umm... Though I am slightly confused, your story has unique qualities...
Jan 26, 2005